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EDIT: Oh I forgot to add,the title is the title of a song that I think explains Bandit as of right now
you can listen to it here--> [link] thanks :)


Well I cant say much but Bandit's condition has been getting worse.:(

Also,as of a third and final time,Ive changed her markings for good.;)

I promised I wouldnt say much to Bandit and I cannot tell you where she is exactlly either.She's just taking a breather that's all.:shrug:


I hope she will get better*:huggle:s her*



AS OF NOW BANDIT IS A PRIVATE OC MEANING YOU CANNOT UNDER ANY CURCUMSTANCES DRAW HER!
Please respect and understand that mkay?:)

ILY Bandi!:heart:

Enjoy!:blowkiss:



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this is really great! I love the pose, and the sky looks great!:aww:
keep upi the great work:)

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I :heart: L from Death Note :aww: '
Proud member of =DeathNotefan cub :dance:
Cant spell Holly without L :heart:
why is L made for me? We have the same birthday, we both have improper pousture, love sugar, and HATE Kira!!
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Thanks alot lovie:blowkiss::hug:

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This looks amazing! I think it's one of your best drawings yet. :D

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"Don't be afraid to go after what you want to do, and what you want to be.
But don't be afraid to be willing to pay the price."

- Lane Frost
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Really?Thanks!!It means alot!:hug:

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You're welcome. :hug:

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"Don't be afraid to go after what you want to do, and what you want to be.
But don't be afraid to be willing to pay the price."

- Lane Frost
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The first thing I notice in this piece is the sky, which is a shame, because Bandit is so pretty, all the attention deserves to be on her. =D Try a color that contrasts better with orange to bring out her markings... blue or purple, such as a night scene, would have made her firey colors pop wonderfully. :)

I see that orange outline around her, and I'm not sure if that is part of your style, if she has a glowing aura, or if you were trying to do some interesting highlights, but I'm going to make a shot in the dark here and say you were experimenting with lighting. That is very good, many many beginning artists do flat shading and don't take into consideration where the light is coming from. The sun is behind and to the left of her, as you drew, so naturally the light would fall on all her upper-left places. Putting the orange highlight only along her back and neck and her hindquarters would make this very three dimensional.

Excellent posing you did here. Her head is drooping, which helps to convey her desolation and sadness. I also like the way you drew her front legs splayed slightly apart, it makes her appear worn out, like she is tired of the direction she is headed now and just wants to stop and rest. The drop shadow under her body looks nice and smudgy too. :)

And now for a bit about porportions- Her near hind leg is much longer than the other. If she straightened out that leg underneath her, she would be standing very cock-hipped. :XD: Remember that the horses' cannon bone (the bone under the hock) is always shorter than their upper leg. Same goes for the front legs- there is less bone below the knee than above it, but all around, the anatomy on her front legs is pretty spot-on. :heart:

Nice job! :dance: I can see this is an improvement from the other pieces in your gallery. :clap: Hope that wasn't too much, and hope I helped you out! :)

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Don't be an idiot like them! They'll drag you down to their level and beat you with experience! :noes:
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Oh I see,that makes alot of sense.I agree that dang leg:shakefist::XD:I'll deffinatlly fix that next time.:)

Maybe I'll use blue to experiment.Thanks so much for the critquie hon:hug:

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Oh also,she glows gold^^;:XD:

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:tighthug: Oh it was no problem! I'm glad I could help you out. :)

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«Ah, the bridle: Essential if you own a horse, sort of kinky if you don't.»

Don't be an idiot like them! They'll drag you down to their level and beat you with experience! :noes:

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